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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 17, 2015 14:40:57 GMT
Don't judge me, I'm bored... and so this happened... cx There are no limits, we are on our own forum after all... -throws self down onto couch- I just really need to unwind after an extremely stressful week and weekend.
Feel free to add characters, powers, wings, unicorns, plots, romances, ect. I really don't have a set out plot, it's for us to develop I suppose...
Otay, I'm going to start with warriors I suppose, it should be the easiest. Just keep the story going I guess. I'll make us some starter characters.
Introduced Characters
Hazepaw - a white tom with pale gray swirl-like markings across his back, down his flanks, and his forehead. He has light green eyes. (our main character/00114f) Winterpaw - a pure white she-cat with bright green eyes and a brown spot above her nose. (another main character/cd98bc) Owlstare - a light creamy brown she-cat with white paws and yellowish green eyes. (queen/8baa00) Snowhare - a lithe white tom with pale gray tortoiseshell markings and amber eyes. (warrior/e25d00) Mottledbell - a pretty blue mottled she-cat with yellow eyes. (medicine cat/b117f6) Beaverstar - a bold, thick furred dark brown tom with black paws and amber-green eyes. (leader/8d633c) Candlelick - a tall, black tom with smudges and wisps of a purplish grey all over his coat. Large ears, that are almost too large, and big orange eyes. His tail is big and plumy, and his muscles are strong. (warrior/7acdab) Zapcloud - he is golden and spiky furred, with light green eyes with no scleras. (warrior/c302fd) Lunarpaw - a bright silver tom with black patches and pale creamy yellow eyes. (apprentice/5c5c5c) Wolfpaw - a lithe cinnamon colored tom with faint bronze mackerel tabby markings and icy blue eyes. (AdderClan apprentice/3749f2)
Relationships Snowhare and Owlstare are mates and their kits are Winterpaw and Hazepaw. Candlelick mentors Hazepaw. Zapcloud mentors Winterpaw. Snowhare mentors Lunarpaw. (none other recorded at the moment)
Few Know Points of the Plot - Hazepaw and Wolfpaw will be a couple. - Winterpaw will like Lunarpaw. - Wolfpaw has a brother who is very deceivingly innocent. - Unnamed brother will harass Hazepaw. (up for more suggestions)
Starter "All cats old enough to stalk their own prey, gather here beneath Old Shrub for a clan meeting!" The large mainly brown furred tom called down from his perch near the base of the brittle plant. Pelts began to appear from the mist. It was true that the fog never really lifted here, in the marsh but it was where the clan made it's home. Two warriors, one brown, the other a tortoiseshell tom, stood proudly from the rest. "Come along kits," the brown she-cat urged, ears perked and eyes softened as she gazed at the two gifts of her romance. Her mate was purring, his tail-tip held high to show his pride. --- [Hazekit] I awoke with wide eyes, having been nudged by Winterkit. "What?" I whined, tired from our night of rough-housing. She just nudged me again and trotted towards the entrance. Reluctantly, I got up and followed her. I spotted my parents just outside the entrance as I drew near. "What's goin' o-" I was interrupted when Beaverstar made an announcement from the Old Shrub. Curiosity sparked within me but I turned to look at my sister, unsure. I hear Owlstare call for us, but I don't move and neither does Winterkit.
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Post by Aкα on May 17, 2015 15:15:41 GMT
((Oh my gosh Owly this is such an amazing idea!!!!! XD XD))
From his place beneath old shrub Beaverstar beckoned them fourth with his tail, knowing all too well that the kits were only 3 moons. With the recent attack upon BogClan by their rival clan AdderClan, they had lost many warriors, and 2 apprentices. If they didn't begin training soon to make these kits fighters, BogClan might just be wiped out...
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 17, 2015 15:28:04 GMT
[ Hazekit ] I turned back around to escape to my nest and Winterkit followed, until our mother grasped onto my scruff. I flailed around in irritation but was brought out of the nursery against my will. I peered around, only to find all eyes were on me. I felt my pelt grow hot, ears falling to my head in embarrassment. My sister was trotting beside us, her whiskers drooping a bit. Owlstare placed me down on the ground and I relaxed slightly, pressing close to the fluffy white pelt of my sister. Mottledbell seemed to give us a wistful smile before she turned her head to Beaverstar.
What happened next?
[ xD Aka -rolls on floor laughing- ]
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Post by Aкα on May 17, 2015 15:32:57 GMT
((Okay hang on, I'm slightly confused. XD Do I also pick up the role of Hazekit and Winterkit using the point of view of I, or do I manipulate the story from outside sources? X3))
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 17, 2015 15:36:30 GMT
[ You can do both, but yes, you are supposed to pick up with Hazekit and Winterkit. Winterkit will get her own point of view later. -nod nod- ^^ ]
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Post by Aкα on May 17, 2015 15:55:34 GMT
((Oooohhh!!! Okee. X3))
I step up to Beaverstar with my fur still fuzzy and kit-warm, big eyes filled with uncertainty. My sister steps up beside me and we try to stand tall as Beaverstar recites the apprenticeship ceremony. "Hazekit, Winterkit. You have resided in the nursery for 3 moons, and have reached a point where we believe that you should be taught on how to hunt, and how to fight... With the recent loss in our clan, our futures can rest on the paws of every cat here who can defend themselvs... So we need you to fight in that as well... Hazekit, from this point on you will be known as Hazepaw, and your mentor will be Candlelick. Snowkit, from this point on you will be known as Snowpaw, and your mentor will be Zapcloud."
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Post by Kit Harington on May 17, 2015 16:03:23 GMT
PSSSSSSSSSSSSSSST
WINTERKIT BAE
x3
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 17, 2015 16:03:57 GMT
I was honestly in a state of shock. I heard you had to wait until you were six moons old to become apprentices. I glanced at Winterki-Winterpaw and shuffled my paws in uncertainty. My sister was distracted by her mentor though, padding up to touch noses with the warrior. I froze and glanced around, looking for my own mentor. Would they like having a fluffy kit for an apprentice. He was smaller than his sister and more delicately built too, which often got me called a she-cat. I turned to look at my parents, surprised when they were talking with each other instead of congratulating their kits. A nose brushed my shoulder and I turned, green eyes wide. It was....
[ Can I have little descriptions for their mentors? ]
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 17, 2015 16:04:21 GMT
[ Lol, you should help out too, Foxeh. It's fun! ]
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Post by Aкα on May 17, 2015 16:10:06 GMT
((Sure! c: ))
It was Candlelick, I was surprised by just how big he was! I had seen the tom around before, he stopped in the nursery once to drop off a vole, and he seemed friendly enough. He played with me and my sister for a bit. Candlelick was a tall, black tom with smudges and wisps of a purplish grey all over his coat. He had large ears, that almost appeared too large, and big orange eyes. His tail was big and plumy, and his muscles were strong. I found myself thinking that Snowpaw might have gotten the easier mentor, Zapcloud wasn't nearly as big, he was golden and spiky furred, with light green eyes with no scleras. Zapcloud was a bit of a loud mouth though, and over confident... I quickly dipped my head to my new mentor.
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 17, 2015 16:32:58 GMT
Candlelick offered me a warm smile in return, which rather startled me. Slowly, I began to relax, adjusting to the idea that I was no an apprentice. I could finally train with Lunarpaw. Excitement finally unfurled in my belly, causing little butterflies to flutter about. Maybe this wouldn't be so bad! "Hello, little one," Candlelick greeted, and I waved my tail to him in response. "We should go out and explore first, if that's alright? Your sister and father might tag along?" the large black pelted tom offered, knowing that you knew Snowhare was mentor to Lunarpaw. This was a great way to start my apprenticeship! "Yes!" I exclaimed and rushed over to my sister and her mentor.
[ Characters and Relations are updated. ] |
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Post by Kit Harington on May 17, 2015 20:02:36 GMT
It was quite obvious Winterpaw was as excited as I was, maybe moreso, as she badgered Zapcloud with tons of questions. I stopped at her side and gave her a nudge, my head to her shoulder, to let her know I was there. She flicked her tail in response. I nearly jumped out of my pelt as a familiar, deep voice spoke from behind me in greeting. Both Winterpaw and I turned around, his voice cutting her off mid-question, and we blinked simultaneously up at our father. My eyes also noticed Lunarpaw, standing quietly next to Snowhare. "Well, it looks like we're all here." Candlelick said with a smile as he, too, approached.
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 19, 2015 0:28:54 GMT
I honestly was unsure how to respond to the fact that our father would be accompanying us. He was a respected warrior, a very powerful one at that. He was next in line to be deputy, which kept him busy. Winterpaw and myself hadn't spent a lot of time with him during our kit-hood. Candlelick and the rest began to trot towards the exit, leaving me behind, absorbed in my thoughts. Lunarpaw turned to look at me, his creamy eyes clearly holding a question. "You coming, Hazepaw?" he beckoned, flicking his tail in a welcoming manner. I ducked my head and blushed a little at his movement and rushed forward. I fell in step behind him as we escaped out into the territory. My eyes tried to soak up as much as they could, for our land was mystifying to me. I could tell my sister was in awe too. "We are nearing the AdderClan border, be careful," Snowhare called out, padding close beside Candlelick. I stiffened a bit and shuddered. Our enemy clan was so close, their scent stung my nose as we grew ever closer. Winterpaw fell back to my side and pressed into my fur, whiskers trembling. The brush rustled on the other side of the border and out popped a patrol.
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Post by кαямα αкαвαηє on May 29, 2015 18:52:18 GMT
Pressing closer to my sister, I tried to make myself even smaller than I already was. Winterpaw however, left my side, suddenly curious and brazen. "What are these fox-hearts doing here?" she questioned, her voice unnervingly loud and unafraid. I wanted to rush forward and hide her from view but honestly I was too afraid. "You bring kits to your borders?" a large cream colored tom sneered, his eyes glowing with very clear disdain. Snowhare shot my sister a look that told her to contain herself but Winterpaw didn't even flinch. "These are apprentices," Candlelick responded calmly and I gazed at my mentor in awe. The cream colored tom snorted.
"Scared, kit?" a new voice spoke, this one quieter and somehow... alluring almost. I turned my head sharply, frightened. What I saw made me freeze. A big cinnamon furred tom stood there, he wasn't quite as tall as the cream cat but he was broad shouldered and well-muscled. His face was rather angular and he had a clear pair of chilling, icy blue eyes. I couldn't even respond, I was lost to the shock. "What? Can't speak, kitty?" the cinnamon tabby taunted, curling his thick tail over his paws carefully. I opened my jaws and then snapped them shut, unsure what to say and how to stick up for myself. "I-I..." I stuttered pathetically. The obviously older tom grinned, which caused his eyes to catch in the faint light. They almost appeared white for a moment, which made me scramble back in terror.
"Hazepaw? What's wrong?" Winterpaw called from her place beside our father. The talk between the warriors had apparently grown more tense but she remained calm and a little indignant. My sister was incredible. I shook my head quickly, unsure what message I was trying to send. I watched her white shoulders lift in a shrug before she turned her bright green eyes back to the conversation. "Hazepaw, huh?" the tabby murmured close to my ear, causing me to squeak and flinch back.
"Y-yeah.."
"New apprentice."
"H-How can you t-tell?" I asked, sure that his words were a statement and not a question. He gave me look, as if the question I had just asked was ridiculous. I watched as he slowly drew a tongue over his paw and rubbed it on his muzzle. It amazed me that he could be so calm when everyone else was so tense.
"You still have your kitten fluff. That and you're terrified," the tom answered after placing his paw back down. I wanted to be like Winterpaw and be indignant but it simply wasn't in me. Instead, I shuffled my paws and looked down, ears heating in embarrassment. I didn't want this AdderClan cat to think I was weak, it made me feel like an incapable little kit who needed to rely on their mother. I felt almost like I had whenever Lunarpaw offered to teach me battle moves, I wanted to impress, to be strong and not seen as a mouse-brain.
"I w-will l-learn not to b-be af-afraid," I told him, peeking up into his icy blue eyes that seemed to shine with a unique amusement.
"Wolfpaw!" the cream tom snarled over his shoulder. The AdderClan patrol was retreating back into the bushes, obviously the warriors had finished up their discussion. I watched the tom, Wolfpaw - though I can't believe he's an apprentice - rise to his feet. Him standing really brought home how much taller he was than I. "I'm coming, Ferretwhistle," he told the cream tom before turning his head half-way back to me.
"I'll see you when you learn to be fearless, kit," he smirked, eyes sparkling with obvious laughter. Then he turned, flicked his tail under my nose and padded away. I stood there, watching as his tail disappeared into the bushes. "What a badger," Winterpaw muttered, startling me. I turned and was met with her curious green eyes. "What did you boys talk about?" she wondered while padding after our small patrol.
What do you tell your sister? What do you think about the mysterious Wolfpaw? How do you feel about your encounter with him? How close are you really with Winterpaw, how much do you trust her? |
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